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I can see the fun in this one. I think using the word "rebel" twice detracts from the logline.
It might be better to start "Fed up with pop culture, a group of rebels..." I think it frames things better.
It's unclear who your protagonist is or what their goal will be. This logline boils down to "a band becomes famous." What sets this apart from a dozen other films like that?