Samurai
Posted: 2017-08-29T11:37:24+10:00 In:

When an accident causes his little sister to be tormented by an evil creature only she can see, a know-it-all teenager must recreate the accident to help her. (28)

Drama, Horror, Mystery

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    3 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      You should be a little more specific when it comes to the accident

      Was it a car accident
      Did the toaster fall into the bathtub
      Was the accident the know-it-all teenagers fault
      Just a little bit of specifics will help

      Here would be my example of using a specific incident, your’s will be different of course.
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      “After his little sister falls in the swimming pool and has to be revived while he was babysitting, a unreliable teen must discover a way to defeat the creature that piggybacked it’s way into the world when she returned from the dead.”
      ——
      Hoped that helped

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    2. Uberwriter

      I would avoid giving away the part about how she’s the only one that can see the creature.

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    3. Singularity

      I wonder what his action will be to discover a way to help her. In other words, I don’t have a clear understanding of what his action will be, and as a result, what the genre is.

      If he, for example, needs to find a priest to hold an exorcism then it’s a faith based story, if he needs to track down a magical item it’s a fantasy, if he needs to fight a demon it’s a super natural thriller. What is it he will do in the movie?

      Also, what specifically must he achieve, or put another way what does “…help her…” mean? Will he make the visions go away, or if the creature is real will he help her fight and kill the creature?

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