After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.

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Stan Antonio

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Biltrex,

For your consideration: a metaphor for discussing your logline in terms of its "nucleus" -- core concept.

Using Scott Myers' illuminating metaphor, it seems to me I've been going around and around and around the outer shell of the atom of your story. What I don't understand is the nucleus, the core concept. Distilled to a few words, what do you consider to be the core concept, the nucleus, around which your plot, your logline, revolves?

Biltrex,

For your consideration: a metaphor for discussing your logline in terms of its "nucleus" -- core concept.

Using Scott Myers' illuminating metaphor, it seems to me I've been going around and around and around the outer shell of the atom of your story. What I don't understand is the nucleus, the core concept. Distilled to a few words, what do you consider to be the core concept, the nucleus, around which your plot, your logline, revolves?

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