TRANSGENDERS
After the murder of their best friend, a group of regular city guys struggle to find the suspect but unearth secrets about their friend and a conspiracy to take over the city.
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you can take out struggle to find the suspect, it doesn’t really add anything extra.
you can take out struggle to find the suspect, it doesn’t really add anything extra.
If they are regular you don’t need to say regular, just say city boys, however I would narrow the logline to one main character to focus on if possible.
If they are regular you don’t need to say regular, just say city boys, however I would narrow the logline to one main character to focus on if possible.
Thanks for the comments. I accept the advice about ‘city boys’
Thanks for the comments. I accept the advice about ‘city boys’
A logline should reveal specific characters, not hide them in general situations. So there’s not just a conspiracy to take over the city, there is a specific conspirator. Who is the villain trying to take over the city? A politician? A mobster? Monty Python? Who?
A logline should reveal specific characters, not hide them in general situations. So there’s not just a conspiracy to take over the city, there is a specific conspirator. Who is the villain trying to take over the city? A politician? A mobster? Monty Python? Who?