potential dark thriller “the see saw”

by variable · Maestro · 6,820 pts 599 views

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to prove his innocence, a framed undercover agent must side with his part-mafia informer upon discovering his mentor’s hand in the conspiracy..

(how to i include the stakes, that if he goes head-on, his identity as a patriot falls to question, since his senior manages the entire database of all the agents of the department

also later on (in the “all is lost” section) he discovers how his final hope turns out to be corrupted too

The premise is probably childish, help me)

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CraigDGriffiths · Legend · 12,600 pts ★ Accepted

What is his goal? Do that story in your Logline.

A deep undercover agent is framed when he discovers ... that links back to the executive at his agency.

A deep undercover agent must rely on a mafia informant to prove his own innocence when he discovers .....

Foxtrot25 · Maestro · 8,420 pts

How about: Undercover Mafia

:)

variable · Maestro · 6,820 pts

"A by the book undercover agent must team up with his mafia informant to prove his innocence after being framed by his former mentor and put the responsible party behind the bars"

thanks Richiev for adjective "by the book" and for pointing out his goal more clearly

thanks Foxtrot25, even i don't like the title myself (what was I thinking??) can somebody also suggest a title

finally thanks to CraigDGriffiths for your second suggestion, I chose your answer because your second suggestion seems to fit

thanks again everyone for such insightful responses

I love logline.it

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