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variableUberwriter
Posted: December 27, 20172017-12-27T03:52:13+10:00 2017-12-27T03:52:13+10:00In: Crime

potential dark thriller “the see saw”

to prove his innocence, a framed undercover agent must side with his part-mafia informer upon discovering his mentor’s hand in the conspiracy..

(how to i include the stakes, that if he goes head-on, his identity as a patriot falls to question, since his senior manages the entire database of all the agents of the department

also later on (in the “all is lost” section) he discovers how his final hope turns out to be corrupted too

The premise is probably childish, help me)

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      CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2017-12-27T09:12:40+10:00Added an answer on December 27, 2017 at 9:12 am

      What is his goal? Do that story in your Logline.

      A deep undercover agent is framed when he discovers … that links back to the executive at his agency.

      A deep undercover agent must rely on a mafia informant to prove his own innocence when he discovers …..

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      Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-12-27T11:38:00+10:00Added an answer on December 27, 2017 at 11:38 am

      I’m not too keen on the see saw title. What’s does part mafia mean? Disgraced may work better than framed

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      Richiev Singularity
      2017-12-27T13:52:07+10:00Added an answer on December 27, 2017 at 1:52 pm

      “When he’s framed by his former mentor, a by the book undercover agent must team with an annoying?mafia informant who’s the only witness who can clear his name and put his former boss behind bars.”

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      variable Uberwriter
      2017-12-28T03:09:45+10:00Added an answer on December 28, 2017 at 3:09 am

      “A by the book undercover agent must team up with his mafia informant to prove his innocence after being framed by his former mentor and put the responsible party behind the bars”

      thanks Richiev for adjective “by the book” and for pointing out his goal more clearly

      thanks Foxtrot25, even i don’t like the title myself (what was I thinking??) can somebody also suggest a title

      finally thanks to CraigDGriffiths for your second suggestion, I chose your answer because your second suggestion seems to fit

      thanks again everyone for such insightful responses

      I love logline.it

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      Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-12-28T03:33:11+10:00Added an answer on December 28, 2017 at 3:33 am

      How about: Undercover Mafia

      🙂

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