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'Who' is this "wrong man"; knowing 'who' he is, tells the audience the Hero has to go on a dififficult Journey. There's no Batman without the Joker.
Hey FFF, I think there is a very good improvement in the logline by every update. You will still need to go back and think about the story (which is totally normal).
Weak points to me:
- Why is the director Persian? Is there a special reason behind this not counting the location setting for audience?
- Why Paris? Are there a lot of Persian people in Paris? Or are Persian people in love with the city of Paris? Etc.
- How come he picks the wrong guy? Accidentally? Is there an impostor?
Maybe this could help:
A broken film producer's last hope is to persuade a Persian director to shoot a blockbuster action-movie in Paris, but he is fooled by an impostor. Discovering this too late, he has no choice but to start the shooting with the false man.
Thanks everyone, I made a last attempt to sum up the main story. Is the logline acceptable in this last attempt? Interesting? I think my movie may have some structure problems : maybe it's not enough "confined" (paris/middle east),
1st act, the film critic accepts to try to find the Persan director (even if he have no clues),
1st part of 2nd act : the search in the Middle East mountains and the meeting with the impostor.
middlepoint : the deal with the impostor.
2nd part of 2nd act : shooting the movie in Paris
3rd act : resolution (the whole movie is a fraud and the critic leave to go looking for the real director)
Thanks again, I wait for an eventual last feedback, then I'll go back thinking about the whole thing.
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