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The ";" that separates the two sentences stands like a hole in the script to me. Again, you should focus on the movie structure and you will find a way to write a one sentence logline where all the elements are connected, with clear stakes and goals.
With a touch of irony you can almost avoid to specify that it's a comedy.
Look at the Galaxy Quest logline to get inspired :
"The alumni cast of a space opera television series have to play their roles as the real thing when an alien race needs their help" (imdb).
"Confront" is vague and rather static. So they meet their controllers face to face. Then what do they do? What must they do? What becomes their objective goal?
"Confront" is vague and rather static. So they meet their controllers face to face. Then what do they do? What must they do? What becomes their objective goal?
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