Does my logline work, is it clear and show the character, event, and action.
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What's the difference between a "so called Dad" and a real one?
And as variable pointed out, she needs a specific objective goal.? "....overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes." is general, nonspecific.? ? The overcoming needs to be translated into a specific game plan.? Exactly how does she propose to win her peers acceptance and respect?
When she ordered by a judge to move in with her estranged father and his family in Bel-Air, a street wise black teenager girl from the ghetto must overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes.
I might be wrong, but to me Compton California is more ghetto than suburbia.
I like the idea that a judge on the recommendation of DCS is forcing both the teenager and the estranged /absent father to forge a new relationship.
Can you give us a series of events that show how she overcomes prejudice etc.