“An ordinary young man, is physiologically transmuted by an unimaginable energy that predates history and is irrevocably forced to become humankind’s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, seeking that power wants to blow up the Earth.”

Everyone - I'm reworking the specifics. Let me tweak it and give it a brand new go. All your tips ARE helpful. Truth!

dpg, I see. Point well taken. I'm gonna work on this. Thank a lot.

>>unimaginable energy

Unimaginable? So... I'm supposed to buy a premise that leaves my mind blank, nothing specific to work with?

What fills that blank space in my mind is... the Force. What is so unique, so special about this "unimaginable energy" that differentiates it from the Force?