In a war driven futuristic dystopia an insecure generals son learns he is “The Savior” the rebellion’s prophecy calls for and must choose to abandon his home or avoid his destiny. For Meet-up.

Yes, I agree with the above comments. He needs to leave home to achieve something, and there must be dire consequences if he fails. Simply saving the rebels from war is a bit vague. And I'd say he leaves his home and not include the 'or avoid his destiny' bit.

What Nir Shelter said. Choosing is not an objective goal, not a sufficient basis for a plot.

Also it is inevitable that logline readers will compare the Savior angle to the "The Matrix". What differentiates it from "The Matrix"?

What Nir Shelter said. Choosing is not an objective goal, not a sufficient basis for a plot.

Also it is inevitable that logline readers will compare the Savior angle to the "The Matrix". What differentiates it from "The Matrix"?