A recently divorced doctor and an entrepreneur facing an existential crisis, form an unlikely partnership and take the help of earthly wizards to overcome the trials of life.

Same again, there line sounds interesting, but lacks clarity. 'Trials of life' is ambiguous, and there term 'earthly wizards' is confusing; is the MC not from Earth? That said, it is still possible to see a potential story within the line, but it is just unclear what the story is specifically about.

Also, my first review, so probably don't take the critique too seriously.

>>>to overcome the trials of life

That covers a l-o-t of territory. A plot should focus on one specific problem that needs to be urgently solved.

>>>to overcome the trials of life

That covers a l-o-t of territory. A plot should focus on one specific problem that needs to be urgently solved.