An old-school private investigator, assisted by his tech-savvy daughter, investigates the alleged death of the son of a presidential candidate only to uncover a deep conspiracy that puts them in the crosshairs.

Possibly true about the odd couple if that is the case.

I still can't see how this case will be any more interesting than the many other PI's case. I think it needs personal stakes and clear motivation from a good inciting incident.

"Old school" dad vs "tech savvy" kid--what's being set up is an odd-couple relationship to enliven the story. So I think it belongs in the logline. Maybe something like:

An old-school private detective must enlist the help of his estranged, tech-savvy daughter to solve the murder of the son of a presidential candidate. (24 words, 150 characters)

"Old school" dad vs "tech savvy" kid--what's being set up is an odd-couple relationship to enliven the story. So I think it belongs in the logline. Maybe something like:

An old-school private detective must enlist the help of his estranged, tech-savvy daughter to solve the murder of the son of a presidential candidate. (24 words, 150 characters)