Ckharper
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Funny you said that - I just tweaked to “crime fiction writer” and “detective wife” or maybe it should be “detective widow” but that sounds kind of funny to me. I’m liking the idea of two strong female leads battling…
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Picturing this I can only see the guy coming off as mean not funny if the wife is perfect. I think she needs to have her own goal/motivation a la How To Lose A Guy In 10 Days. I do…
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Another attempt: An ex-detective turned lonely housewife feels alive again when she sleeps with an old flame, but when he ends up dead she must hunt the killer before she’s next.
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Fabulous comments. Thank you.
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All excellent questions, thank you.
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Maybe ...When an army of cyborgs capture a plane destined to.., (what’s special about this plane?), a fierce space detective must take it back.
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Building on earlier comments how about: When a gang of violent junkies overtake security at an Urgent Care center, an opiate-dependent nurse injects herself with NarCan (?) to sober up and start fighting back.
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If we knew what the treasure was would it explain why that thing can bring them back to the real world? I really like the premise but I'd like to understand the connection.
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I saw the comments but still don't understand the story. It seems the wife is actually your protagonist and has set him up, but then what? She's already successfully nailed her cheating husband. What's next? Where's the continuing conflict?
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What's the conflict throughout this movie? Is the woman-theif now blackmailing the man for a job? What's the job?