CLAY53

Penpusher · 190 points

110 points to Logliner

8 loglines
6 reviews

Chris has been brutalized throughout the history of mankind, turned into a demon by God, he vows to stop mankind’s brutal rampage

January 6, 2021
Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force.

August 20, 2020
A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

August 19, 2020
A bible schoolteacher is being beat to death by two cops, if he doesn’t fight back, he will be killed.

July 29, 2019
When a Bible Schoolteacher is brutalized by two racist cops, he must kill or be killed.

July 28, 2019
Jesus Christ returns to earth with a sword, living under an alias, he does battle with the Devil to save his daughter’s soul.

March 14, 2019
When an angel is brutalized by two racist police officers, he finds himself in a face to face confrontation with his estranged daughter that will decide the fate of humanity.

January 28, 2019
An angel living under an alias on earth, must judge humanity, a choice that may damn his daughter to eternal death.

January 27, 2019

on Chris has been brutalized throughout the history of mankind, turned into a demon by God, he vows to stop mankind’s brutal rampage

Hi Mike, thanks for the review. This any better? When the eternal soul is brain damaged by two brutal homicidal police officers, he turns into a demon to get his revenge.
on Wrongfully accused of being part of a plot to overthrow Santa, an amateur detective elf goes on the run to prove his innocence and solve the case.

[MAJOR EVENT:] Wrongfully accuse of being part of a plot to overthrow Santa [HERO:] an amateur detective elf [MAIN ACTION:] goes on the run to prove his innocence and solve the case I’m new to this seems pretty good to…
on FARTACUS — An NC-17 bawdy adventure set in Ancient Rome: When a lowly slave is mistaken for aristocratic progeny he has one chance to outwits rivals, seduce virgin nobles, and con the Gods on his improbable road to becoming Caesar.

Love the concept. Not a logline yet. Can't wait to see this movie.
on A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force. Hi Mike, does this structure work better for you even if…
on A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

Your comment helps, and I appreciate your words and the time you took the write them. The Scriptures state Revenge is the Lords. People don't want to accept when the Lord returns, he returns with a weapon of war... Why?…
on A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

My sentence structure had too many and's so I wrote a more concise sentence