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Chris has been brutalized throughout the history of mankind, turned into a demon by God, he vows to stop mankind’s brutal rampage
Hi Mike, thanks for the review. This any better? When the eternal soul is brain damaged by two brutal homicidal police officers, he turns into a demon to get his revenge.
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Wrongfully accused of being part of a plot to overthrow Santa, an amateur detective elf goes on the run to prove his innocence and solve the case.
[MAJOR EVENT:] Wrongfully accuse of being part of a plot to overthrow Santa [HERO:] an amateur detective elf [MAIN ACTION:] goes on the run to prove his innocence and solve the case I’m new to this seems pretty good to…
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FARTACUS — An NC-17 bawdy adventure set in Ancient Rome: When a lowly slave is mistaken for aristocratic progeny he has one chance to outwits rivals, seduce virgin nobles, and con the Gods on his improbable road to becoming Caesar.
Love the concept. Not a logline yet. Can't wait to see this movie.
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A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.
Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force. Hi Mike, does this structure work better for you even if…
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A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.
Your comment helps, and I appreciate your words and the time you took the write them. The Scriptures state Revenge is the Lords. People don't want to accept when the Lord returns, he returns with a weapon of war... Why?…
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A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.
My sentence structure had too many and's so I wrote a more concise sentence
