Clint Pittenger

Penpusher · 95 points

205 points to Logliner

4 loglines
2 reviews

A friend house sits a two story cabin alone in the quiet mountains unaware someone else is there watching his every move.

July 31, 2012
A FATHER goes searching for his missing son, and his friend, FRANK house sits, hoping the son will come home, unaware, someone is already there with him.

July 29, 2012
While a FATHER searches for his missing teen son, his friend, Frank house sits, unknowingly unaware someone else is there with him.

July 27, 2012
Picked for a top secret military mission, an elite female sharpshooter team have twenty-four hours to assassinate one target, with only one shot—in the deadly mountains of Afghanistan.

July 27, 2012

on A Brilliant but reckless mechanic promises his dying brother that he will save the one girl who can cure a zombie-plague before the military kill her.

I agree with djmc about the military killing her. Maybe re-word it so it discusses the conflict between her and the military. This is just me tweaking the logline around, and you don't have to use it. I was just…
on A FATHER goes searching for his missing son, and his friend, FRANK house sits, hoping the son will come home, unaware, someone is already there with him.

Its not lame... I worked on it, and I think I have it now.