Clint Pittenger

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on A Brilliant but reckless mechanic promises his dying brother that he will save the one girl who can cure a zombie-plague before the military kill her.

I agree with djmc about the military killing her. Maybe re-word it so it discusses the conflict between her and the military. This is just me tweaking the logline around, and you don't have to use it. I was just…
on A FATHER goes searching for his missing son, and his friend, FRANK house sits, hoping the son will come home, unaware, someone is already there with him.

Its not lame... I worked on it, and I think I have it now.