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Criminal investigator Darryl Blake groups with four detective trainees to gather evidence involving snuff video related crimes taken place at a university. While insisting ASPD student Matthew Efflick may be the culprit, almost little to no evidence can be found to prove it; all while he’s continuing his murderous pursuit.
Thank you for the response! After reading your suggestions I've realized that the way I wrote my logline is not how I originally envisioned it. It turns out that by introducing the detective character first, it gave people the impression…
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Criminal investigator Darryl Blake groups with four detective trainees to gather evidence involving snuff video related crimes taken place at a university. While insisting ASPD student Matthew Efflick may be the culprit, almost little to no evidence can be found to prove it; all while he’s continuing his murderous pursuit.
Thank you so much for the suggestion! I'll admit, I wasn't too focused on a main lead as I didn't know how to make them interesting without being cliche. My last logline at least had a descriptive protagonist and after…
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Longtime crook and materialist Tony Argleton is recruited by an FBI funded group to risk his life retrieving a priceless, golden mcguffin stolen by the ruthless Nickle Revolver crime family, in order to avoid any lawful punishment and change his image.
Yeah I was trying to reply to your review but didn't know I sent a review and from the looks of it I can't delete it, but thanks!
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Longtime crook and materialist Tony Argleton is recruited by an FBI funded group to risk his life retrieving a priceless, golden mcguffin stolen by the ruthless Nickle Revolver crime family, in order to avoid any lawful punishment and change his image.
Thank you so much for the review! I took your 3 suggestions and incorporated them into the logline. Sure, it's an action packed heist film, but I'll admit, it needs to have logic if people are going to take it…
