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In ‘Found Photos’ style, a pair of Google Street View car drivers unknowingly take a photo of a dangerous cult performing a ritualistic killing in a remote field and are pursued by them. Detectives are left with an abandoned car and a series of mysterious photos in order to find the pair before it’s too late. (Inspired by these types of lists – http://www.viralnova.com/creepiest-things-on-google-maps/
The theme is great in my opinion, the logline needs to be elaborated as the other commenters also mentioned.
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Based on real events. “After a decorated Wehrmacht officer’s family accidentally is sent to a Nazi death camp he must save them before the camp commandant dismantles the camp and kills all the inmates.”
I don't think you should be afraid of the length of the story. I would certainly keep the original story, and do some research on the officer husband, e.g. was he looking for his family, was he doing his own…
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An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Thanks Rutger! FFF - how about you, would you suggest one of the loglines from above or an alternate version for them?
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Based on real events. “After a decorated Wehrmacht officer’s family accidentally is sent to a Nazi death camp he must save them before the camp commandant dismantles the camp and kills all the inmates.”
Hi Rutger, I think it is great to see the story in more detail. I would be interested in watching a movie about this event! Why mix the officer and why alternate events? I think it is just a good…
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When an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.
I love this last one, would love to see it directed by Kevin Smith :-) starring the Dogma cast with Salma Hayek in the lead role, Alan Rickman standing in for the late George Carlin as the father, team of…
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An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Updated the nightmare part to something new. Let's hear your voice! :-) Here are the earlier versions sorted by date modified latest to first: ? An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to experience…
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An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Hi FFF and thanks for your thoughts! At this point I am out of ideas on the nightmare part of the logline, I would welcome any suggestions for a situation where a couple faces sins they committed against each other,…
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An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Hi Lee, thanks for the comment! I think we are looking for a word that expresses the state when you are not yet breaking up, but not in heat anymore as well. A state where the partners are not putting…
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When an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.
Maybe something like: Disinherited because of her lack of interest in the family farming business, gamer daughter returns home to save his father's life by winning an online gaming championship?
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An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Hi dpg, got your points! the couple decides for a "normal" counseling retreat service, e.g. http://guidedoc.com/the-8-best-marriage-counseling-retreats-in-the-us . They agree to meet with the service provider at a nice excursion place inside the forest, so they decide to hike there. Their…
