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on Nearing the end of his parole and looking to put his criminal past behind him, an ex-con’s plans are derailed by the arrival of two former prison buddies, one with a bullet wound and the other with a plan to rob the local bank.

I think this is good - a lot of potential. Maybe you could get more specific than 'arrival'. What does this mean exactly? They come for a visit? To move in with him? This logline is still general enough that…