Karel Segers

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38 loglines
214 reviews

After falling in debt to a crime family, a cocky mechanic is forced to strip stolen cars for an auto-garage, but when his love interest is killed in a hit-and-run caused by the family’s erratic nephew, he turns the family against itself to seek vengeance and escape the debt.

February 28, 2019
When a young man takes a decision to marry against a will of his controlling and psychotic mother, his girlfriend mysteriously disappears.

September 1, 2016
When a teenage girl is refused by her school girlfriends for still being a virgin, she decides to commit suicide when a sex offender kidnaps her.

August 30, 2016
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A dangerous serial killer is the only survivor in a plane crash, when she was transported to a different prison, she is rescued by tibetans from remote high mountain village. After being treated from her injuries she faces a choice to leave the village or to merry 7 brothers of a family who took care of her, according to their matriarchal tradition.

August 27, 2016
A good father and respected police officer is prisoned after he accidentally shot a young child, who was in the driving away robber’s car. He is trying to get his life back with a support of citizens of his city.

August 24, 2016
When corporate employees escaping a building blaze are machine-gunned down at the fire exit, a PR girl becomes trapped in a stairwell, and must outwit a deranged gunman.

August 7, 2016
When her shark-diving cage breaks off and sinks to the seabed, a first-time diver must resurface amidst a looming great white before her oxygen tank runs out. [In The Deep, 2016]

August 2, 2016
After a nuclear disaster that destroyed most of civilisation, a scientist encounters, and starts a life with a lone woman, but when they take in a drifting man, a love triangle emerges between them, and he must challenge the stranger’s intentions. [Z for Zachariah, 2015]

May 13, 2016
After witnessing a backstage murder, a punk band is forced into a back room by malicious skinheads, and must fight their way out to survive. GREEN ROOM [2016]

May 11, 2016
When a pawn store robbery turns deadly, a Hollywood stunt driver finds himself in possession of the loot, and must destroy the violent goons who want it back. [Drive, 2011]

May 7, 2016

on When a young man takes a decision to marry against a will of his controlling and psychotic mother, his girlfriend mysteriously disappears.

Thank you for reviews and opinions.?Could it be like this ? A young man devastated by his?fianc?? sudden disappearance, initiates his own?investigation which leads to his mother, uncovering?her dark side of love for her son.
on A dangerous serial killer is the only survivor in a plane crash, when she was transported to a different prison, she is rescued by tibetans from remote high mountain village. After being treated from her injuries she faces a choice to leave the village or to merry 7 brothers of a family who took care of her, according to their matriarchal tradition.

Thank you so much for opinions and advises. Maybe to go this way, in a comedy genre probably:?The serial killer wants to start a new life with a tibetan man who rescued her from a plane crash,?she falls in love…
on A dangerous serial killer is the only survivor in a plane crash, when she was transported to a different prison, she is rescued by tibetans from remote high mountain village. After being treated from her injuries she faces a choice to leave the village or to merry 7 brothers of a family who took care of her, according to their matriarchal tradition.

Another version. I Also decided to substitute "the serial killer" to a?nun.Survivor of a plane crash, a young nun finds herself in a remote high mountain tibetan village where she has to accept their matriarchal tradition and marry all the…
on A good father and respected police officer is prisoned after he accidentally shot a young child, who was in the driving away robber’s car. He is trying to get his life back with a support of citizens of his city.

Hi Nir and Craig, the?inciting incident happened when a cop doing his job to stop the robber, ?shoots at tires, he didn't know that robber brought his (robber's) child to the robbery and accidentally the bullet hits the kid, cop…
on After he smack-cams a deranged vagabond, a prankish vlogger must fight to survive when the stranger invades his home sporting a bloody billhook.

There's something really iffy about pranksters and vloggers as movie protags, I feel that if it worked well it would have been done a bit more by now. It is topical though. As Nir said the event needs to be…
on When her shark-diving cage breaks off and sinks to the seabed, a first-time diver must resurface amidst a looming great white before her oxygen tank runs out. [In The Deep, 2016]

Meant to be in Classics*
on A war has broken out because an English citizen was out trying to survive in the Amazon and started burning the Amazon rainforest down. An American military aircraft pilot was flying over the Amazon rainforest and spotted him and didn’t like that he started a fire in the Amazon rainforest. Now the English want our territory.

Hey Luke, did you download the checklist? Also, check out the tips on how to write a logline.First question you may expect: who's the main character?
on A war has broken out because an English citizen was out trying to survive in the Amazon and started burning the Amazon rainforest down. An American military aircraft pilot was flying over the Amazon rainforest and spotted him and didn’t like that he started a fire in the Amazon rainforest. Now the English want our territory.

Hey Luke, did you download the checklist? Also, check out the tips on how to write a logline.First question you may expect: who's the main character?
on After witnessing a backstage murder, a punk band is forced into a back room by malicious skinheads, and must fight their way out to survive. GREEN ROOM [2016]

Thanks. I was thinking about mentioning the MC, but it really dopes feel like one group up against the other in the film. It is actually a little more than being stuck in a room. At first they're forced in,…
on After the king asks him to serve as his advisor, the lord of the North discovers the murder plot of his predecessor as an attempt to cover up the heir’s illegitimate claim to the throne.

I think this is the best plot for the logline. However, when the series was described to me from friends in 2013, the white walker plot was placed right upfront, as well as the fact that the seasons last about…