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on Oh Goddess After his alpha friend turns alpha fiend and psycho-tortures him into the abyss, a wannabe hero’s new revelation and divine intervention rekindle his forgotten mission to replace religion.

Hi Jay, My brain just exploded. But I'm not sure that was your intention. The wordplay ('alpha friend turns alpha fiend') is cute but replaces real specificity — 'wannabe hero' and 'alpha fiend' are generic labels, not concrete character details.…