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When a many-times-jilted long-distance truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must learn to trust again, to win her heart.
Hi there I think D Forde is also same old lol but 'deeper and denser" too haha They meet in the city where we show him as the fish out of water and then she gets in the truck and…
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When a self-absorbed desert-trawling truckie falls for a devoted mother and city writer online, he must take responsibility for his own son, before winning her heart or losing his last chance for true love.
Thanks Nir, I think it is definitely time for me to attend one of your analysis meetups :-)
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When a self-absorbed desert-trawling truckie falls for a devoted mother and city writer online, he must take responsibility for his own son, before winning her heart or losing his last chance for true love.
Hi guys, thank you all so much for your comments. It's given me lots to think about. Russell, you're right ? 90-year-olds do fall in love! Why her specifically? I have some corny ideas about kismet moments and reminders of…
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“After a struggling writer’s sister is kidnapped by deranged script writer, he’s given 24 hours to create the perfect logline for the maniacs new screenplay, or his sister dies!”
Looks like 'the perfect logline' to me. Do we need a flaw? Is writer's block a flaw?
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When lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.
Ahhh well, now that's SHAKESPEARE you are talking about lol :-)
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When lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.
Thanks guys. Really grateful for all your feedback. It's very inspiring and encouraging :-)
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When lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.
Jeez Tony! :-) I just read an article about having a big surprise at the end of Act 2 to propel the story into Act 3 ... and feel like I am reading the end of Act 2 here ...…
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When lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.
Oh Yes! Of course, truck HAS TO break down/or he has to come across someone that has broken down! Had it in a very very early draft but not this one (go figure!). Would love to add more description in…
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When lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.
I love you guys!!! :-) dpg .... an opposite to D Forde could be as corny as the 'overseas assignment' ... i think what I am really missing here is an interesting, uncontrived [is that a word?] ticking clock. Richiev:…
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When lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.
Not yet .. but for the purposes of this .. how about ... When a shy long-haul truck driver falls for a city writer online, he must cross more than the outback to win her heart before she accepts an…
