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on After a meek high-school junior is thrown out of her house by her authoritarian mother, she unwittingly gets drawn into drugs and human trafficking, and struggles at every turn to survive in this dangerous underworld.

Is the main obstacle (antagonist) for the protagonist the "dangerous underworld?" Seems general /non descriptive and fails to create an alluring picture for me. Loglines should encapsulate the heart of the film, so the listener best sees and gets it.