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on After publicly exposing his super-human abilities, an angel-hybrid teenager is hunted by his demonic half-brother who seeks to increase his power and enslave mankind.

What is an angel-hybrid? Change the word exposing so that it you can get rid of publicly. Also change "increase". Also wouldn't his half-brother know that he's half angel? Also super human abilities is implied by being half-angel. I think…