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on To pay off his debts, a former boxer addicted to gambling is coerced by his loan shark into carrying out an attack against a famous footballer just months before the World Cup.

It's a good story but familiar. Can you incorporate a fresh angle?
on Logline: After killing each other in a muddy ravine on Guadalcanal, a Japanese soldier and an American Marine awaken as unwillingly tethered ghosts and spend decades protecting the grandson born from their families’ impossible union—bickering across wars, cultures, and generations as they search for redemption and peace. Genre: Primary: Historical Fantasy Drama Secondary: War Drama / Supernatural Family Saga

Fascinating idea. The execution will be difficult. Good luck with it.
on “You can plan a wedding, a career, a thousand tomorrows… but peace? Peace just finds you when you finally stop planning.”

This is a good premise, but it needs character and action.