Sumi

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on After witnessing a god rape her sister, a naive nymph seeks revenge, risking her life in the process.

I agree with the above review.? You have your main character and an inciting incident and an end goal. But the logline needs further information on how she plans to achieve that goal. In the text - could also cut…