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A drug dealer’s toad venom trip turns into an action packed psychedelic nightmare when the police raid his house.
Good rewrtie, thanks man !
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An introverted young man is hesitant to take part in Faroe Islands’ biggest party day, Òlavsøka, until two free spirits take him under their wing for a social adventure.
Sure did, thanks ;)!!
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When the parents are detained by weather abroad, a man-child elder brother must take charge of his dysfunctional family’s Christmas customs.
Thank you very much, very helpful :)
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A socially disconnected bartender makes a connection with the odd new beer deliver guy. He struggles to develop his new friendship as his old stuck-up friends hold him back.
Great boil down, thanks!!!
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An argument between two friends brings about the end of their relationship.
Too vague, add more details i.e main character's flaw and what the argument is about
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A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
thanks for all the feedback, really appreciate it:)!
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A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
It's the friend's mom that has got cancer, not the friend. The objective would be to provide emotional support for his friend but the obstacle is his own inner resistance to show affection. Perhaps it's all too internal?
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A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
A witty young man fears showing affection, but when his old friend reveals his mom has got cancer, he must face his fear. is this more specific? I'm struggling with the last bit, what he must do in order to…
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A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
Ah, I see how it really requires to be more specific. Thanks:)
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After a heart attack on his highschool graduation, an obese mama’s boy sets off to lose a hundred pounds before starting college, in the hopes of getting laid and avoiding an early grave.
UPDATED LOGLINE After suffering a heart attack, a mama's boy sets off to lose a hundred pounds before getting into college in order to save his life and pursue girls.
