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Which one logline should I work on: Multiple Personality Malfunction, Boy becomes king, the youngest known president, girl vs gods, woman revenge for loss of her people, or volatile guy saves city? I leave it to you. P.S. The Train Demon Script is almost done, so until this is figured out, I’ll be working on that logline to get it ready. Thank you and i appreciate the help.
I like the idea of your 'Goliath' story, but you need to find a way to get rid of the unit's guns. I mean, if a sling and a stone can kill a giant, then so can a .45 However, if you can figure that out. (Maybe the modern military unit enters a world where technology doesn't work) Then that would beRead more
I like the idea of your ‘Goliath’ story, but you need to find a way to get rid of the unit’s guns.
I mean, if a sling and a stone can kill a giant, then so can a .45
However, if you can figure that out. (Maybe the modern military unit enters a world where technology doesn’t work) Then that would be a good one to work on as well.
See lessAfter their kids miss an all-day school field trip, a well-organized single mother and a disorganized single father must trade off child care duties in order to meet work deadlines that will make or break their careers.
I think this works.
I think this works.
See lessAfter a failed ritual to resurrect their mother severely damages their bodies, two young alchemists search for the mythical Philosopher’s Stone to restore themselves.
One of the things Nir's logline example solves is the problem of having two goals in your logline. First, your characters want to resurrect their mother. A strong goal. Then once they are hurt they completely?abandon their dead mother in order to help themselves. Kind of a selfish goal. By just sayiRead more
One of the things Nir’s logline example solves is the problem of having two goals in your logline. First, your characters want to resurrect their mother. A strong goal. Then once they are hurt they completely?abandon their dead mother in order to help themselves. Kind of a selfish goal.
By just saying, they are disfigured by a resurrection spell and leaving out the dead mother, it helps focus the logline on the actual problem.
Honestly, from a story standpoint, it would be better if after failing to resurrect their mother, the two brothers realize they need to find the philosophers stone to complete the ritual and save their mother.
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