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When a passionate playwright finds his muse in a romantic, young woman, disguised as a male actor, they engage in an affair behind the scenes of the production of Romeo and Juliet under the jealous suspicion of the annoying noble to which her aristocratic family has betrothed her.
I think the objective goal of 'Shakespeare in love' is paying off his debt. He must write a successful play 'or else' (Goal) but he has writer's block (Obsticle) He discovers his muse and a forbidden love in an aristocratic lady posing as a male actor (Possible second inciting incident) In order toRead more
I think the objective goal of ‘Shakespeare in love’ is paying off his debt.
He must write a successful play ‘or else’ (Goal)
but he has writer’s block (Obsticle)
He discovers his muse and a forbidden love in an aristocratic lady posing as a male actor (Possible second inciting incident)
In order to succeed, her gender must be kept a secret. (Possible second obstacle)
I can see why it might be a little difficult to write a concise logline for “Shakespeare in Love”
See lessA contentedly married woman must face the truth about her marriage when the body of her husband’s lover, who fell to her death in a glacier 50 years ago, is discovered.
>>I felt that the wife?s action, inner as it?may be, needs mentioning. An interesting observation and it touches on my objective goal in posting a logline for the film. ?The outward action is her preparations for their 45th wedding celebration. ?But that ?just provides a contextual framework,Read more
>>I felt that the wife?s action, inner as it?may be, needs mentioning.
An interesting observation and it touches on my objective goal in posting a logline for the film. ?The outward action is her preparations for their 45th wedding celebration. ?But that ?just provides a contextual framework, an arena in which she must wrestle with the dramatic problem of their marriage revealed (to her) by the discovery of the body after nearly ?half a century.
See lessIn the near future when an upgraded police droid becomes able to think and feel, it must learn to survive in a violent world where everyone wants to exploit its humanoid consciousness.
Agree: "becomes sentient" ?is ?more concise.>>Does it matter that it?s the ?near? future? If it?s a police droid we know it?s in the future already.Good point. ?So:When a police droid is upgraded and becomes sentient, it must learn to survive in a violent world where everyone wants to exploitRead more
Agree: “becomes sentient” ?is ?more concise.
>>Does it matter that it?s the ?near? future? If it?s a police droid we know it?s in the future already.
Good point. ?So:
When a police droid is upgraded and becomes sentient, it must learn to survive in a violent world where everyone wants to exploit its humanoid consciousness.
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