1. Posted: March 19, 2020In:

    After killing the son of a biker, a fugitive decides to go the run with his estranged daughter.

    Tony Byrd Penpusher

    What should the logline be like?

    What should the logline be like?

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2020In:

    After being hired by the CIA as a mercenary, a man teams up with four other mercenaries to stop drug lords from taking a plane hostage.

    Richiev Singularity

    You can't really take a plane hostage... What or who is on the plane, that is valuable enough to take hostage... The president's daughter (For instance)

    You can’t really take a plane hostage… What or who is on the plane, that is valuable enough to take hostage… The president’s daughter (For instance)

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  3. Posted: March 15, 2020In:

    Private: A daughter of a man whom she was build by becomes a cyborg befriending teams up with a group of other young women to stop robots from invading Earth.

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    OlDustyDogg Logliner

    The daughter of the man who built her becomes a cyborg is a bit redundant. What is the significance of that relationship to the story? Wouldn't whoever built her be considered her father? It's confusing. This isn't perfect but this is what I get from it. A cyborg girl teams up with other young womanRead more

    The daughter of the man who built her becomes a cyborg is a bit redundant. What is the significance of that relationship to the story? Wouldn’t whoever built her be considered her father? It’s confusing. This isn’t perfect but this is what I get from it.

    A cyborg girl teams up with other young woman to stop robots from invading earth.

    I hope this helps.

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