Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • Recent Loglines
  • Most Answered
  • Reviews
  • Feedback Wanted
  • Most Visited
  • Most Voted
  • Random
  1. Posted: July 29, 2022In: Action

    A washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save the planet Earth when the time space continuum becomes inverted by a vindictive inventor in a Las Vegas wax museum.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 29, 2022 at 7:53 pm

    Odie gives good advice

    Odie gives good advice

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: June 22, 2022In: Action

    When a translucent humanoid creature gets his memory back, he sets out to become the worlds judge, jury and executioner based on his way of life, while dealing with a group of people that disagree with his ways and try to stop him at any cost

    Niesy Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 10:26 am

    Good and interesting idea, however, is there a motive such as a specific memory as to why he wants to "become the worlds judge, jury and executioner" - this may better your logline in establishing the event that happened and the action the creature takes as a response to the event. I think "become tRead more

    Good and interesting idea, however, is there a motive such as a specific memory as to why he wants to “become the worlds judge, jury and executioner” – this may better your logline in establishing the event that happened and the action the creature takes as a response to the event.

    I think “become the worlds judge, jury and executioner” could be a little simplified.

    Other than that, really interesting idea and would like to see how this could turn into a short film!

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: June 22, 2022In: Action

    When a charismatic pick pocket acquires the bag of a world leader along with top secret information, he must risk making enemies in order to leak the information to the world.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 23, 2022 at 6:52 pm

    You should tell us what information the lead character discovers so the reader will know the stakes.

    You should tell us what information the lead character discovers so the reader will know the stakes.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 8,000
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,720

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.