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To win the affections of the dean’s daughter, a bad boy rich kid has until graduation to get accepted into a snooty club, in order to prove his worth.
Also - just got to a 100 loglines. Huzzah! (Only 8 of them are good haha.)
Also – just got to a 100 loglines. Huzzah! (Only 8 of them are good haha.)
See lessWhen her boyfriend’ doctors are unable to treat his fatal illness, an unsophisticated Papuan girl in service to his father must convince him to abandon his traditional medical views and travel to Papua to allow her and her Medicine man grandfather to save is life.
I think it reads well this way, from the perspective of the girlfriend. It does seem like she is the one with the actual story goal. to get her boyfriend to her medicine man Grandfather.
I think it reads well this way, from the perspective of the girlfriend. It does seem like she is the one with the actual story goal. to get her boyfriend to her medicine man Grandfather.
See lessAfter being disgracefully fired for cheating from his billion-dollar startup, penniless maverick joins his ex-girlfriend’s bankrupt company to regain his lost glory
The story sounds interesting. It could be a comedy as well. I have a couple of questions: 1. What does the maverick expect from joining a bankrupt company? Does he intend to turn it around? 2. What may prevent him from regaining his lost glory? 3. Why is he penniless? He had a billion dollar startupRead more
The story sounds interesting. It could be a comedy as well. I have a couple of questions:
1. What does the maverick expect from joining a bankrupt company? Does he intend to turn it around?
2. What may prevent him from regaining his lost glory?
3. Why is he penniless? He had a billion dollar startup before he got fired. It’s logical that he’d still have a good amount of money when he was fired unless he was incarcerated and forced to pay a hefty fine for his crime.
In a logline you are clear about the character (the penniless maverick), the inciting incident (he’s fired from his job), and his dramatic need (to regain his lost glory). What’s missing is the conflict/antagonistic force (person) that may prevent him from achieving his goal. Without this element, you don’t have a story.
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