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  1. Posted: November 29, 2023In: Coming of Age

    In 1933 Germany, a time-travelling teenage outsider from 1914 discovers that his daughter has become entangled with a communist terror group. Now, he must infiltrate the organisation to protect her from the dangerous path she’s chosen, all whilst wrestling with the seductive pull of the rising Nazi youth movement.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 29, 2023 at 2:45 am

    I would love to watch it. In 1933 Germany, a time-traveling teenager from 1914 must save his newfound daughter entangled with a communist terror group, all while wrestling with the seductive pull of the rising Nazi youth movement. Keep going!

    I would love to watch it.

    In 1933 Germany, a time-traveling teenager from 1914 must save his newfound daughter entangled with a communist terror group, all while wrestling with the seductive pull of the rising Nazi youth movement.

    Keep going!

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  2. Posted: December 19, 2022In: Coming of Age

    When faced with his fathers “old world” mindset demand to become a successful football player and run the family restaurant business, a teenage, integrated migrant Hip-Hop kid, decides against the family traditions, that brings him into troubles and the family to desperation.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 19, 2022 at 2:51 pm

    "Faced with his father's "old world" mindset, a well-meaning migrant kid pursues his passion for hip-hop angering his father who wants him to work in the family business."

    “Faced with his father’s “old world” mindset, a well-meaning migrant kid pursues his passion for hip-hop angering his father who wants him to work in the family business.”

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  3. Posted: September 12, 2022In: Coming of Age

    Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian, a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 13, 2022 at 5:28 pm

    Hi meme, I cannot see the relation between the two sentences in your logline. You wrote: Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian, and a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears. The second part of your logline can be an indeRead more

    Hi meme,

    I cannot see the relation between the two sentences in your logline.
    You wrote:

    Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian,

    and

    a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears.

    The second part of your logline can be an independent logline by itself. Even if it needs more work:
    To conquer her fears, a teenager joins her school’s improv group.
    Use the above logline as a template and re-write if you think this logline serves the purpose.
    But I cannot see the significance of her strained relationship with her sole guardian.
    Can you clarify what do you exactly mean by “Navigating”?

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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