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Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian, a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears.
Hi meme, I cannot see the relation between the two sentences in your logline. You wrote: Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian, and a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears. The second part of your logline can be an indeRead more
Hi meme,
I cannot see the relation between the two sentences in your logline.
You wrote:
Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian,
and
a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears.
The second part of your logline can be an independent logline by itself. Even if it needs more work:
To conquer her fears, a teenager joins her school’s improv group.
Use the above logline as a template and re-write if you think this logline serves the purpose.
But I cannot see the significance of her strained relationship with her sole guardian.
Can you clarify what do you exactly mean by “Navigating”?
I hope this helps
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After his middle school friends abandon him during the first week of high school, a childish, imaginative teen attempts to win them back with over-the-top fantasy scenarios, but when his best friend and love interest give him an ultimatum, he must either abandon his playfulness or be a loner forever.
Hi iceisnice, This is how I see the logline, based on my understanding of the story: Confronted by his best friend and the girl he has a crush on, a daydreaming teenager must decide whether to act more maturely or be lonely for the rest of his life. If the above logline describes your story, then usRead more
Hi iceisnice,
This is how I see the logline, based on my understanding of the story:
Confronted by his best friend and the girl he has a crush on, a daydreaming teenager must decide whether to act more maturely or be lonely for the rest of his life.
If the above logline describes your story, then use it as a template and re-write.
I hope this helps
Good Luck
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Story is conflict I am not seeing a conflict in the logline. If the lead character came from a long line of witch hunters, there would be a conflict If the witch was an evil witch who planned on eating children, there would be a conflict Where is the conflict? (and by where is the conflict I mean itRead more
Story is conflict
I am not seeing a conflict in the logline.
If the lead character came from a long line of witch hunters, there would be a conflict
If the witch was an evil witch who planned on eating children, there would be a conflict
Where is the conflict? (and by where is the conflict I mean it needs to be in the logline)
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