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A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
Two issues with wording 1: "When his old friend turns out to be in dire need." Be specific. When his old friend angers the Mob. When his old friend is diagnosed with cancer when his old friend becomes addicted to hentai. What specifically is his old friend's dire need of? 2: "He must let his emotionRead more
Two issues with wording
1: “When his old friend turns out to be in dire need.” Be specific.
When his old friend angers the Mob.
When his old friend is diagnosed with cancer
when his old friend becomes addicted to hentai.
What specifically is his old friend’s dire need of?
2: “He must let his emotional guard down?” So, letting his emotional guard down will solve his friend’s dire need? How does letting your emotional guard down solve someone’s specific problem?
I owe a bookie 50k… I will solve this by letting down my emotional guard?
I am on trial for murder… I can solve this problem by letting down my emotional guard.
I am in dire need because I can’t read… No problem this can be solved by me letting down my emotional guard.
What specifically must the lead do to solve his friend’s dire problem????
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In this fantasy world, what form does the tyrant businessman take? Does the antagonist become the king of the fantasy land, an invading warlord, or an evil dragon that must be slain? What does the conflict look like, what are the actions your lead character must take to achieve his goal? "After hisRead more
In this fantasy world, what form does the tyrant businessman take?
Does the antagonist become the king of the fantasy land, an invading warlord, or an evil dragon that must be slain?
What does the conflict look like, what are the actions your lead character must take to achieve his goal?
“After his twin sister dies, a struggling teen slips into a fantasy world where the tyrant businessman who caused his sibling’s death transforms into a firebreathing dragon which he must slay to save the land.”
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thedarkhorse, I'll give you points for persistence. This seems to be a story you not only want to tell, but that you MUST tell. Have you considered making the geek a girl? Out of desperation, he swallows his misplaced sense of pride to have her tutor him. She's only in it for the money -- she loatheRead more
thedarkhorse,
I’ll give you points for persistence. This seems to be a story you not only want to tell, but that you MUST tell.
Have you considered making the geek a girl? Out of desperation, he swallows his misplaced sense of pride to have her tutor him. She’s only in it for the money — she loathes about him. He needs the grades; she needs the money.
fwiw
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