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A failed private investigator becomes entangled in the disappearance of a 17-year-old girl to clear a large gambling debt.
I like the story when I read your synopsis, but your logline needs polish. How about: When a failed investigator can't pay back his gambling debt he gets 1 week to find the missing daughter of a murderous creditor. It's not there yet, but raise the stakes. Have fun, Nis from Denmark
I like the story when I read your synopsis, but your logline needs polish. How about:
When a failed investigator can’t pay back his gambling debt he gets 1 week to find the missing daughter of a murderous creditor.
It’s not there yet, but raise the stakes.
Have fun,
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After The murder of there friend, a group of inner-city teens vows revenge by killing every cop in California.
What compels the reader to want the lead characters to succeed? I could see if the leads went after the specific police officer but to kill every cop in California, both men, and women, Black, Asian, White, young, old, even those who have dedicated their lives to helping others? At some point won'tRead more
What compels the reader to want the lead characters to succeed?
I could see if the leads went after the specific police officer but to kill every cop in California, both men, and women, Black, Asian, White, young, old, even those who have dedicated their lives to helping others?
At some point won’t people tune out?
See lessInterwined stories between an Russian immigrant, a brother and sister dealing with their abusive father, a drug dealer and a pimp in four tales of sex, drugs and murder in Brighton Beach, Brooklyn.
Missing the arc of these intertwined stories. Pulp Fiction: "The lives of two mob hitmen, a boxer, a gangster’s wife, and a pair of diner bandits intertwine in four tales of violence and redemption"
Missing the arc of these intertwined stories.
Pulp Fiction: “The lives of two mob hitmen, a boxer, a gangster’s wife, and a pair of diner bandits intertwine in four tales of violence and redemption”
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