1. Posted: November 25, 2019In:

    When she discovers her former lover been assassinated, and her son would be dumped in the river for his father?s sins. a ex convict must free herself from prison and risk her own life to save and take down the Harlem crime mob and their boss responsible for her son?s kidnapped.

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    Possible title: Even Worse (Because the mob boss who kidnapped her son is bad, but the mom is 'even worse'... sort of a female version of Payback)

    Possible title: Even Worse

    (Because the mob boss who kidnapped her son is bad, but the mom is ‘even worse’… sort of a female version of Payback)

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  2. Posted: November 10, 2019In: ,

    A good cop working as a mole to bring down a mobster and a corrupt cop working as a mole for the mobster struggle to unmask each other.

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    thedarkhourse:My first version was exactly as you suggested.However, I believe that a logline should be immediately and entirely clear on the first read. An industry reader should not have to read a logline more than once to? understand what the story is about.? Maybe most readers would immediatelyRead more

    thedarkhourse:

    My first version was exactly as you suggested.

    However, I believe that a logline should be immediately and entirely clear on the first read. An industry reader should not have to read a logline more than once to? understand what the story is about.? Maybe most readers would immediately understand the story concept with the version you suggested.? But just in case, as an insurance policy, I opted to pad my version with two more words for the sake of clarity.? It is certainly arguable that my padding was superfluous.

    regards

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2019In:

    O assassino dos meus sonhos

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    [Como eu s? sou proficiente em ingl?s, n?o em portugu?s. Ent?o, eu li e estou respondendo ? sua linha de log por meio do tradutor do Google.] Primeiro de tudo, acho que voc? tem uma premissa muito interessante. Poderia ser a base para um filme convincente e profundo. Com base em como eu li sua linhaRead more

    [Como eu s? sou proficiente em ingl?s, n?o em portugu?s. Ent?o, eu li e estou respondendo ? sua linha de log por meio do tradutor do Google.]

    Primeiro de tudo, acho que voc? tem uma premissa muito interessante. Poderia ser a base para um filme convincente e profundo. Com base em como eu li sua linha de log (em ingl?s), eis como eu posso escrever isso:

    Depois de testemunhar o suic?dio de um assassino em s?rie, um jovem policial come?a a ter sonhos que revelam onde os corpos est?o enterrados. Agora ele deve …

    … fazer o que? Qual ? o objetivo dele como resultado de ser afligido por esses sonhos?

    Se voc? incluir uma resposta para essa pergunta (no menor n?mero poss?vel de palavras), acho que voc? ter? uma linha de log e um gr?fico vencedores.

    Espero que isso fa?a sentido e ajude. Muitas felicidades para este script.

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