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Two occult detectives must investigate a murder at a prestigious boys boarding school when the body of a missing boy is discovered.
'When the defiled body of a missing child is discovered, an impassive occult-detective is given a task to decipher the mysterious crime of the city.' You must establish a main character to your story. When you tell a story there must be a view point to tell from. Given that you follow lead detectiveRead more
‘When the defiled body of a missing child is discovered, an impassive occult-detective is given a task to decipher the mysterious crime of the city.’
You must establish a main character to your story. When you tell a story there must be a view point to tell from.
Given that you follow lead detective as your main character. Establish a plot where your main character is facing difficulties to show emotions because of his past. Relate his past to the story’s plot.
E.g., Here you will reveal in the end that the boy’s bully-victim murdered him. Relate this to detective’s past by creating a story where he had a abusive childhood, he wanted to do something about it, but he was never able to… something that can give a dramatic touch to your story. Connect the dots by transforming your character to understand this child’s emotion, and make him do something extraordinary for the child. I think, audience will always love such thing.
Write a 25 page story on your idea. It does not matter what you write, you will find a way to give your story a proper justification.
See lessA remand prisoner is re-routed to a temp facility where she must play ball with her vile cellmate in order to identify her own unwitting connection to the terror attack that diverted her.
It seems like you are shutting the barn door after the horses have escaped. ----- "In order to prevent a terrorist attack, an FBI agent goes to prison undercover and has forty-eight hours to deceive her cellmate into giving up the detail of the attack." ----- It ups the ante if the Terrorist attackRead more
It seems like you are shutting the barn door after the horses have escaped.
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“In order to prevent a terrorist attack, an FBI agent goes to prison undercover and has forty-eight hours to deceive her cellmate into giving up the detail of the attack.”
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It ups the ante if the Terrorist attack hasn’t happened yet and getting the information from the cellmate is vital to stopping the terrorist plot.
A mild-mannered but disgruntled teller leads a hostage revolt against his captors during a bank siege in order to get away with the stolen loot for himself.
Tony Edward: I am attracted to the? story because: 1]I want to see how he pulls it off without getting caught.? It essentially becomes a heist flick, does it not? 2] I want to see the character arc, how circumstances provide an opportunity for a nice guy, a heretofore compliant, law-abiding milquetoRead more
Tony Edward:
I am attracted to the? story because:
1]I want to see how he pulls it off without getting caught.? It essentially becomes a heist flick, does it not?
2] I want to see the character arc, how circumstances provide an opportunity for a nice guy, a heretofore compliant, law-abiding milquetoast, to unleash his repressed shadow .
As for moral justification, what’s the moral justification for Danny Ocean ripping off the treasure vault of 3 Las Vegas casinos?? ?There really isn’t.? The? audience buys into the character and the heist on the basis of emotional factors.? So sell the emotional justification, not the moral.
Regards and best wishes with this story.
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