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  1. Posted: December 21, 2017In: Crime

    tittle:_” impenetrable” the desperate high school teacher kidnap his student and ask her family huge amount of money for his only daughter for cancer diagnosis

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 23, 2017 at 10:04 am

    In a logline it's better, to begin with, what sets the story in motion rather than end with it. "When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate?teacher..."

    In a logline it’s better, to begin with, what sets the story in motion rather than end with it.

    “When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate?teacher…”

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  2. Posted: November 29, 2017In: Crime

    A young Police Officer named Satya who lost his GUN (with 8 bullets) on duty, which put his job at risk. And what if a common man finds that missing gun and started doing crimes. While Satya is searching for his gun, City started witnessing the Crimes. Will Satya finds his gun back? How he solved crimes in the city caused by 8 bullets from his gun.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 30, 2017 at 11:25 pm

    After a rookie police officer loses his gun, he must recover the weapon before the 8 bullets remaining are used to commit further crimes.

    After a rookie police officer loses his gun, he must recover the weapon before the 8 bullets remaining are used to commit further crimes.

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  3. Posted: October 31, 2017In: Crime

    A city detective, who’s going through a mid-life crisis, is summoned to a small town where he’ll struggle to catch a serial killer, and where he’ll also face the chance to give his life meaning again.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 9:18 am

    Loglines are about what a protagonist intentionally strives to do -- objective goals.? They are? not? about what he??unintentionally or accidentally discovers along the way that conveniently solves a subjective problem.One reason this is so is because film is a visual medium.? Every action element oRead more

    Loglines are about what a protagonist intentionally strives to do — objective goals.? They are? not? about what he??unintentionally or accidentally discovers along the way that conveniently solves a subjective problem.

    One reason this is so is because film is a visual medium.? Every action element of a logline must be capable of being visualized.? The visual for catching the serial killer is obvious.? Either there is a final scene where the detective apprehends the serial murderer or kills him in the process.

    But what’s the visual for an internal state of mind, for “giving his life meaning again”?

    This is not to say that the script shouldn’t play out a scenario in which the protagonist solves his subjective problem while solving some objective problem.? Protagonists should have a character arc and solving a subjective problem entails a character arc.

    But, again, the logline is about the action vector — not the character arc.

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