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A former US Marine living in Japan uncovers a conspiracy that runs far deeper than Tokyo’s criminal underworld when he is recruited to help avenge the murder of a Yakuza boss.
You should give us a hint as to what is special about the lead character... Why him? When an ex-CIA agent living in Japan is hired to avenge the murder of a Yakuza boss, he must...
You should give us a hint as to what is special about the lead character… Why him?
When an ex-CIA agent living in Japan is hired to avenge the murder of a Yakuza boss, he must…
See lessA disgraced cop, offered the chance to regain custody of his son unearths a hidden layer of secrets of those involved within and outside the law when he must catch a serial killer before more children die.
I like the idea of your story but felt the logline could do with a bit more work. Here's a rewrite for your consideration. Use it as your own if it suits your story. "Despite risk of becoming the scapegoat of a corrupt police force, an honest cop commits unwarranted intervention against a child killRead more
I like the idea of your story but felt the logline could do with a bit more work. Here’s a rewrite for your consideration. Use it as your own if it suits your story.
“Despite risk of becoming the scapegoat of a corrupt police force, an honest cop commits unwarranted intervention against a child killer thus hindering his chance of regaining custody of his son.”
See lessA disgraced ER doctor reinvents himself as an amphetamine cook getting entangled in helping members escape a community with a violent secret.
This feels like two stories. One about an ER doc turned meth cook, and the other about someone helping people escape somewhere. Try starting with...After becoming entangled in a violent and secretive community, a disgraced ER doctor must...(insert second-act-main-action here).
This feels like two stories. One about an ER doc turned meth cook, and the other about someone helping people escape somewhere. Try starting with…After becoming entangled in a violent and secretive community, a disgraced ER doctor must…(insert second-act-main-action here).
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