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“A heartbroken kitten learns about survival, love, loss and forgiveness during his relentless journey to find a new home after being abandoned one cold December morning.”
"When he is abandoned, a heartbroken kitten must find the purrfect home all while trying to survive the freezing New England winger."
“When he is abandoned, a heartbroken kitten must find the purrfect home all while trying to survive the freezing New England winger.”
See lessA young woman struggles to cope with life in America after being orphaned by parents immigrated from war torn Lebanon.
This is a little confusing. Can I suggest... When a young Lebanese immigrant is orphaned, she struggles with her new life in America. - or - When a young orphan flees war-torn Lebanon, she struggles with her new life in America. I also recommend including with the specifics of her struggle. For examRead more
This is a little confusing.
Can I suggest…
When a young Lebanese immigrant is orphaned, she struggles with her new life in America.
– or –
When a young orphan flees war-torn Lebanon, she struggles with her new life in America.
I also recommend including with the specifics of her struggle. For example, is she struggling the feelings of isolation? Is she struggling to find a long lost relative?
See lessWhen a teenage girl realizes her big sister works as a prostitute to put herself through lawschool, she has to find a way to financially support her, without her sister finding out who the money comes from, or else she will not accept the help and continue with this self destructive work.
You cannot assume that everyone reading this logline will share your view that the sister being a sex worker is a terrible thing. I recommend you take the judgment out of the logline, especially the bit about sex working being self-destructive. You can certainly have a theme that explores sex workinRead more
You cannot assume that everyone reading this logline will share your view that the sister being a sex worker is a terrible thing. I recommend you take the judgment out of the logline, especially the bit about sex working being self-destructive.
You can certainly have a theme that explores sex working being self-destructive but leave it out of the logline.
I’m sure the Pretty Woman logline would focus on Vivian finding true love rather than being rescued from sex working by Edward. Perhaps your logline could focus on the teenage sister finding a way to support her big sister through law school.
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