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A woman decides to record events of her friend’s sexual relationship with her deaf mute younger sister.
Hi IvyEight6, Ok, a woman decides to record those sexual events: Why? To achieve what? Why does she have to do that? How is she going to do that? What is stopping her? To me, your logline has to include selling points. I hope this helps.
Hi IvyEight6,
Ok, a woman decides to record those sexual events:
Why?
To achieve what?
Why does she have to do that?
How is she going to do that?
What is stopping her?
To me, your logline has to include selling points.
I hope this helps.
See lessA young widow struggles with the consequences of killing her rapist in a post apocalyptic world.
I am not a big fan of the world 'struggles' Also, you might give us a hint of what the consequences of killing the man are. Other than that, the story sounds intriguing and that is half the battle! So overall, not bad. --- "When she kills the man who raped her, a young widow goes on the run in a posRead more
I am not a big fan of the world ‘struggles’
See lessAlso, you might give us a hint of what the consequences of killing the man are.
Other than that, the story sounds intriguing and that is half the battle!
So overall, not bad.
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“When she kills the man who raped her, a young widow goes on the run in a post-apocalyptic wasteland, when his vicious clan seeks revenge.”
Two teenagers debate their philosophical views – with quarterstaves. But theur philosophical views are not the only things at stake; their friendship is, too.atv
Hi, assaf, Again, I have difficulty understanding quarterstaves/quarterstaff. Are you talking about the weapon used in Europe during the middle ages? Are you trying to say: Two teenagers argue over their philosophical views/beliefs? What is the relationship between their philosophical views/beliefsRead more
Hi, assaf,
Again, I have difficulty understanding quarterstaves/quarterstaff. Are you talking about the weapon used in Europe during the middle ages? Are you trying to say: Two teenagers argue over their philosophical views/beliefs? What is the relationship between their philosophical views/beliefs and quarterstaves/quarterstaff?
May I suggest you write your logline without using metaphors, idioms, etc? Write it as if you are telling your logline to a 5-year-old kid. Straight forward black and white. Write it down, share it here and we will help beautify it AFTER we understand what it is that you are trying to relay.
I hope this helps.
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