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  1. Posted: May 13, 2022In: Drama

    While debating over trusting in skill vs. Trusting in luck, two teenaged friends engage in a quarterstaff duel to prove their philosophical viewpoints

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on July 19, 2022 at 3:50 pm

    Hi Assaf, Debating over skill vs. luck, two teenage friends engage in (I'm having difficulty understanding quarterstaff duel - What is it?) a duel to prove their philosophical viewpoints. Can you find a substitute for this terminology? I hope this helps

    Hi Assaf,

    Debating over skill vs. luck, two teenage friends engage in (I’m having difficulty understanding quarterstaff duel – What is it?) a duel to prove their philosophical viewpoints.

    Can you find a substitute for this terminology?
    I hope this helps

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  2. Posted: May 16, 2022In: Drama

    A pair of zealous philosophical teenagers translate their viewpoints into a series of quarterstaff duels, but the taste for violence threatens to turn their friendship and any rational argument into a mere animal lust to destroy each other.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on July 18, 2022 at 3:52 pm

    Hi Assaf, I suggest you provide some context by writing a synopsis. Your proposed logline sounds like a logline translated from a different language into English. Let us know what the story is. I hope this helps.

    Hi Assaf,
    I suggest you provide some context by writing a synopsis. Your proposed logline sounds like a logline translated from a different language into English. Let us know what the story is.
    I hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: July 14, 2022In: Drama

    An divorced actor decides to reconnect with his daughter after she becomes famous in her own right.

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    Added an answer on July 15, 2022 at 4:08 pm

    Hi IvyEight6, I think you need to provide a little more context. Like: 1- Why was the actor disconnected from his daughter in the first place? 2- Why does he want to reconnect now? 3- Does he want to reconnect particularly because she is becoming famous, too? These are the things that create an inteRead more

    Hi IvyEight6,
    I think you need to provide a little more context. Like:
    1- Why was the actor disconnected from his daughter in the first place?
    2- Why does he want to reconnect now?
    3- Does he want to reconnect particularly because she is becoming famous, too?

    These are the things that create an interest in reading your script.
    I hope this helps.

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