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  1. Posted: April 8, 2020In: Fantasy

    After mythology’s most vicious monsters and history’s most heinous criminals escape from hell, a neurotic college-sophomore finds herself imbued with the power to send these evildoers back from whence they came.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 10, 2020 at 5:26 am

    Too many villains.Less is more.Focus? on one alpha-bad dude or dame.

    Too many villains.

    Less is more.

    Focus? on one alpha-bad dude or dame.

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  2. Posted: March 26, 2020In: Fantasy

    A young priest journeys with the devil and finds God.

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    Added an answer on March 27, 2020 at 6:26 pm

    No hook, premise & inciting incident..

    No hook, premise & inciting incident..

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  3. Posted: March 20, 2020In: Fantasy

    After a great war in Averia, a former female assassin seeking redemption is taken under the wing by a noble family, where she must learn to navigate high society while keeping her real identity a secret from the people that hunt her.

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    Added an answer on March 25, 2020 at 9:58 pm

    Frankly, I think her past, her harrowing career as an assassin, would be more interesting than her struggles to escape that past by hiding out in high society.? The premise? in this logline is more suitable for a sequel.? First write an origin story.Just saying.?

    Frankly, I think her past, her harrowing career as an assassin, would be more interesting than her struggles to escape that past by hiding out in high society.? The premise? in this logline is more suitable for a sequel.? First write an origin story.

    Just saying.

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