1. Posted: May 4, 2019In:

    When a portal opens up for demons to escape Hell, the devil?s son must go to earth to round up the demons and deliver the one who made the portal to Yahweh before He cleans up the mess, sending every demon and creature into oblivion along with the son, if he?s still on earth.

    Richiev Singularity

    Here is a thought. Perhaps start with a regular joe. He has a wife and kid and is living the American dream. A normal life The gates of hell are open and it turns out this regular joe is the son of the devil, half human, half devil. He turned his back on hell for the love of a woman and he is livingRead more

    Here is a thought.

    Perhaps start with a regular joe. He has a wife and kid and is living the American dream. A normal life

    The gates of hell are open and it turns out this regular joe is the son of the devil, half human, half devil.

    He turned his back on hell for the love of a woman and he is living his life incognito and just wants to be a regular guy.

    Now to save his family he must send the demons back to the abyss.

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  2. Posted: May 1, 2019In:

    After an explosion opens a hole for demons to escape from Hell, the dweller of humanity, aka the devil’s son, goes to earth to run up the demons before Yahweh sends his armies to clean up the mess, sending every demons into oblivion along with the dweller, if he’s still there.

    The_CNI Samurai

    There are some questions that spawn from reading this logline. What explosion is this? Who caused it? Was it accidental? If so then you don't need to say that an explosion opened the portal, you can just say that the portal was opened. Also as Richiev said, it works so much better with a ticking cloRead more

    There are some questions that spawn from reading this logline. What explosion is this? Who caused it? Was it accidental? If so then you don’t need to say that an explosion opened the portal, you can just say that the portal was opened. Also as Richiev said, it works so much better with a ticking clock. That way we feel the urgency and stakes.

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  3. Posted: April 30, 2019In:

    A sulky Teenager from a Forest tribe is magically transported to a Medieval society populated with mythical creatures after she accidentally breaks a sacred statue. She must find the Infamous Witch in order to fix the statue before sunset or transform into a spirit creature forever.

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    Richiev Singularity

    The story is coming together, it is unique enough to stand on its own but you could use 'The Wizard of Oz' as a template. This is a good thing (Same but different sells in Hollywood) As for the logline, is the lead character still a caveman (woman) as in previous versions of the story or is the 'forRead more

    The story is coming together, it is unique enough to stand on its own but you could use ‘The Wizard of Oz’ as a template. This is a good thing (Same but different sells in Hollywood)

    As for the logline, is the lead character still a caveman (woman) as in previous versions of the story or is the ‘forest tribe’ something different now?

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