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When sharman’s parents died in bringing her to life with superpowers abilities in her, in a world where commoners hope on the safety of their lives to the hero they turned against, sharman must destroy earth in absorbing more sound energy in defeating an alien invader who wants her powers.
Yes, but needs work.
Yes, but needs work.
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You have two inciting incidents... that is one inciting incident too many. When a 21-year-old delves into the world of mathematics, he uncovers a profound cosmic connection that resonates throughout the universe. (There is no conflict) When a 21-year-old encounters an actress chosen by a wealthy entRead more
You have two inciting incidents… that is one inciting incident too many.
When a 21-year-old delves into the world of mathematics, he uncovers a profound cosmic connection that resonates throughout the universe. (There is no conflict)
When a 21-year-old encounters an actress chosen by a wealthy entrepreneur to replace his missing daughter, who happens to be the young man’s lost love, he must… (Then tell us what he must do)
I would choose one of these stories to concentrate on for the logline. That doesn’t mean both stories won’t be in the finished script, it just means for the logline you should tell the ‘main’ story.
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Why have they been captured, and what must they do to escape. I feel you need to expand upon the action and event to create a fuller logline
Why have they been captured, and what must they do to escape. I feel you need to expand upon the action and event to create a fuller logline
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