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  1. Posted: November 2, 2016In: Fantasy

    a negligent mother must find her daughter’s soul and bring her back from a mythical white forest before the soul detached completely from the body. Possible Title : “White Woods”

    Knightrider Mentor
    Added an answer on November 7, 2016 at 10:52 am

    You could have some fun with this, my first thought was a new movie in the vein of Army of Darkness. A mother who goes from Zero to Badass, not just empowered, but to someone who would do anything for her child. I would also say she must "retrieve her daughter's soul from a mythical white forest" itRead more

    You could have some fun with this, my first thought was a new movie in the vein of Army of Darkness. A mother who goes from Zero to Badass, not just empowered, but to someone who would do anything for her child.

    I would also say she must “retrieve her daughter’s soul from a mythical white forest” it just saves you a few words and still implies a journey to return with an item so to speak

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  2. Posted: November 5, 2016In: Fantasy

    John, Eliza, Jessica, Lily, Mike, Franck, Simon, and Victoria are the characters created in Anonymous? mind. They go through a series of events and happenings that finally make them to understand the difference between reality and dream, and realize the true spirit and nature of their creator, Anonymous.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 6, 2016 at 2:26 pm

    If the reveal at the end of the story, is the characters are all a figment in the mind of Anonymous, then I would not add that to the logline. I would not give away a big reveal.

    If the reveal at the end of the story, is the characters are all a figment in the mind of Anonymous, then I would not add that to the logline. I would not give away a big reveal.

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2016In: Fantasy

    A detective’s ex-wife asks him to find their missing son, he discovers that a mysterious old woman abducted him, and learns dark secrets about his wife and his own past, that forces him to take action.

    Gabriel Yakub Logliner
    Added an answer on October 11, 2016 at 5:56 pm

    Such awesome feedback, thank you!!?Will go away and revise again. ?I think I'm realising that I haven't figured out the plot entirely... amazing how writing a ?log line can reveal such important info!

    Such awesome feedback, thank you!!?Will go away and revise again. ?I think I’m realising that I haven’t figured out the plot entirely… amazing how writing a ?log line can reveal such important info!

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