1. Posted: April 30, 2016In:

    After witnessing a god rape her sister, a naive nymph seeks revenge, risking her life in the process.

    Richiev Singularity

    I want to echo what dpg said. The lead character who seeks revenge should be the victim. ?Sort of, "I spit on your grave" Meets "God of war" (The video game)

    I want to echo what dpg said. The lead character who seeks revenge should be the victim. ?Sort of, “I spit on your grave” Meets “God of war” (The video game)

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  2. Posted: May 1, 2016In:

    In a small town, an embittered young male struggles with the beliefs of a little girl who thinks the old man in a Santa suit is Santa while he robs a bank on Christmas Eve.

    dpg Singularity

    But it will be compared to "Bad Santa".Who is the main character? ?The young man or the old man? ?Or are they accomplices?And why would there be a struggle over beliefs in the mind of the young man? ?Why would he care what she believes? Doesn't he have more urgent matters -- the heist -- on his mindRead more

    But it will be compared to “Bad Santa”.

    Who is the main character? ?The young man or the old man? ?Or are they accomplices?

    And why would there be a struggle over beliefs in the mind of the young man? ?Why would he care what she believes? Doesn’t he have more urgent matters — the heist — on his mind?

    ?What is the young girl doing outside after dark? ?Why isn’t she home with her family on the most family-oriented night of the year?

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  3. Posted: April 29, 2016In:

    A misanthropic girl and her rebellious friend are constantly looking for thrills to lighten up their dull lives but when she learns her half-sister has supernatural powers, she realizes having a normal life isn’t so bad.

    FFF Mentor

    Hello, is this for a feature lenght movie or a short? In my opinion this could be a quite accurate synopsis for a short. As a feature lenght movie, I share the opinions of the previous commenters. In detail, I'm not confortable with a character who "realize" something: this is 'internal', a loglineRead more

    Hello,
    is this for a feature lenght movie or a short?
    In my opinion this could be a quite accurate synopsis for a short.
    As a feature lenght movie, I share the opinions of the previous commenters.
    In detail, I’m not confortable with a character who “realize” something: this is ‘internal’, a logline should focus on the ‘external’ to attract me.

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