1. Posted: September 7, 2021In:

    When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship by accident, the crew has to fight for their survival in order to escape

    Sonja Penpusher

    In space no one can hear you in space. Jokes aside, nice logline! I'm thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write "when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship" instead? Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?

    In space no one can hear you in space.

    Jokes aside, nice logline!
    I’m thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write “when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship” instead?
    Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?

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  2. Posted: September 3, 2021In:

    A disillusioned Tibetan monk must exorcise the evil spirit driving people in his home village to suicide before his family is next.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When a Tibetan monk discovers several recent suicides are caused by an evil spirit, he must track down and exorcise the demon if he's to save both his village and his loved ones."

    “When a Tibetan monk discovers several recent suicides are caused by an evil spirit, he must track down and exorcise the demon if he’s to save both his village and his loved ones.”

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  3. Posted: August 30, 2021In:

    A naive woman is seduced by clones who she believes are one and the same and endangers herself by allowing the duplicated men chances at redemption.

    Odie Samurai

    Getting a horror “Multiplicity" movie vibe :) Consider the following: 1. The genre could be Fantasy – where’s the scare? 2. Where does all this take place? A worldbuilder may help orientate. 3. What is the protag’s goal? 4. I cannot envision what “endangers herself” looks like on screen. 5. Are theRead more

    Getting a horror “Multiplicity” movie vibe 🙂

    Consider the following:
    1. The genre could be Fantasy – where’s the scare?
    2. Where does all this take place? A worldbuilder may help orientate.
    3. What is the protag’s goal?
    4. I cannot envision what “endangers herself” looks like on screen.
    5. Are the clones your baddies? If so, what is their redemption goal involving this woman?

    Take care.

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